【寫作任務】

假如你是學校校報英文版的記者，最近采訪了學?；@球隊隊長蘇凱。請你根據下面的采訪摘要，寫一篇關于蘇凱的英文報道。不少于50詞。

蘇凱

· 喜歡體育運動：籃球、網球(容易)

· 喜歡綠色(令人放松)

· 不喜歡看電視(沒趣)

· 房間很整潔，有很多東西

參考詞匯：

隊長 captain 隊team 很多東西 many things

【思路點撥】

該寫作任務要求同學們寫一篇關于蘇凱的英文報道。寫作時，首先要內容全面，要包括采訪摘要中的所有信息。其次，語言既要簡潔、明了，準確地對蘇凱進行描述，又要生動、流暢，能引起讀者閱讀的興趣。

【學生習作】

Su Kai is captain of our school basketball team. He likes basketball and tennis. He thinks they are easy. He likes the colour green. He thinks its a relaxing colour. Su Kai doesnt like watching TV. He thinks its boring. He has a tidy room. He has many things in his room.

【習作點評】

1.習作內容完整，包含了寫作任務中的所有內容提示；用詞準確，easy，relaxing，boring等形容詞清楚地表達了蘇凱的喜好。

2.習作語言較為單一，句型多為“He likes ...”或“He thinks ...”。如果語言再靈活一些就更好了。

3.習作的最后一句完全按照采訪摘要的順序來寫。如果能調整一下順序，文章會顯得更生動、邏輯性更強。

【習作改進】

Su Kai is captain of our school basketball team. He likes basketball and tennis. They are easy for him. He likes the colour green. He thinks its a relaxing colour. Su Kai doesnt like watching TV. Its boring. He has many things in his room, but the room is tidy.